Unfortunately we've determined that your application had too many errors or did not meet up to our standards to allow a revision. These are the concerns with your application:

We feel that the personality section is lacking in both length and substance, beyond what we would consider to be grounds for revisions. We suggest that you spend time fleshing out his personality section with more detail and canon examples.

You are free to reapply for this character or any other character in the next cycle.