While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We would like to see a slightly more cohesive history section if there is no wiki link available. In addition, as is the case with many Pokemon NPCs, we would like to see a little something in his personality about his interactions with the protagonists and what those exchanges say about him.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We would like to see a slightly more cohesive history section if there is no wiki link available. In addition, as is the case with many Pokemon NPCs, we would like to see a little something in his personality about his interactions with the protagonists and what those exchanges say about him.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!