While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
We would like to see a more cohesive personality section that shows how those personality traits tie into his history and actions throughout the course of the canon, as well as how they might impact the way he relates to others. In addition, we would like to see the last part of the history fleshed out to include some detail about what takes place during the book itself.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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We would like to see a more cohesive personality section that shows how those personality traits tie into his history and actions throughout the course of the canon, as well as how they might impact the way he relates to others. In addition, we would like to see the last part of the history fleshed out to include some detail about what takes place during the book itself.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!