While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
In regards to Nino's canonpoint, we would like to know when this takes place as from what we could tell, the order of events listed on wiki is unclear.
Additionally, we would like to see further elaboration on some elements of his personality. How did he improve himself? What elements of Ladybug and Chat does he look at in regards to them being role models and how does this affect him? What did he lie about and what were the consequences from this?
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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In regards to Nino's canonpoint, we would like to know when this takes place as from what we could tell, the order of events listed on wiki is unclear.
Additionally, we would like to see further elaboration on some elements of his personality. How did he improve himself? What elements of Ladybug and Chat does he look at in regards to them being role models and how does this affect him? What did he lie about and what were the consequences from this?
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!