While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

We would like to see a little more elaboration on the effects working with the Clone Troopers had on Anakin's personality. We would also like to know more about his time with Ahsoka Tano and how having a Padawan of his own may have affected his character. At least a paragraph or two will suffice.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!