While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
While your personality details China's relationship with other canon characters, we would like to know more about China's personality itself. In particular, we would like to see know if he is more of his personality type, such as him being an extrovert or introvert, more of his dislikes or fears, just what about the modern world has him become nostalgic, and any concerns he might have that make him behave the way he does. In short, we wish to know about China as a person.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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While your personality details China's relationship with other canon characters, we would like to know more about China's personality itself. In particular, we would like to see know if he is more of his personality type, such as him being an extrovert or introvert, more of his dislikes or fears, just what about the modern world has him become nostalgic, and any concerns he might have that make him behave the way he does. In short, we wish to know about China as a person.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!