While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:

Unfortunately the wiki link you've given us doesn't contain any actual background or history. We would like a quick summary from you. You don't have to make it too long, just enough to give us an idea of events up to the canon point you've picked.

Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!