Unfortunately we've determined that your application had too many errors or did not meet up to our standards to allow a revision. These are the concerns with your application:
Your application is missing the BACKGROUND section and while that on its own would merit a revision, we also found the PERSONALITY section to be lacking. There are many points which could have been expanded upon, such as what are her motivations and more discussion about the various traits listed,such as her whimsical side. Some of this is due to the lack of a Background section as it would have helped tie in/fill in the gaps. However, a Personality section should also be able to stand on its own and give us a fuller picture of how the character is regardless of their story.
If it had been just one or the other, then we would have granted a revision, but the combination of the issues with both the Background and the Personality sections requires us to reject your application at this time.
You are free to reapply for this character in the next cycle or any other character in the current cycle.
Declined
Your application is missing the BACKGROUND section and while that on its own would merit a revision, we also found the PERSONALITY section to be lacking. There are many points which could have been expanded upon, such as what are her motivations and more discussion about the various traits listed,such as her whimsical side. Some of this is due to the lack of a Background section as it would have helped tie in/fill in the gaps. However, a Personality section should also be able to stand on its own and give us a fuller picture of how the character is regardless of their story.
If it had been just one or the other, then we would have granted a revision, but the combination of the issues with both the Background and the Personality sections requires us to reject your application at this time.
You are free to reapply for this character in the next cycle or any other character in the current cycle.