While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
Unfortunately the current Emotion Sample isn't a full accurate portrayal of the actual mechanic. Having the crystal change colors can be used, but there also needs to be some kind of physical manifestation as well. Rather than write a whole new sample, you can rewrite the one you linked to include the manifestation aspect.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
Revision
Unfortunately the current Emotion Sample isn't a full accurate portrayal of the actual mechanic. Having the crystal change colors can be used, but there also needs to be some kind of physical manifestation as well. Rather than write a whole new sample, you can rewrite the one you linked to include the manifestation aspect.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!