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Empatheias Mods ([personal profile] simpathis) wrote2014-05-25 12:34 am

[ applications: canon characters ]

— APPLICATIONS ARE ALWAYS OPEN

Reserves OPEN
OC Applications are here


IMPORTANT! We are officially in endgame until August 31, 2020. Applications are on a rolling basis. There is a small "block" period from the 1st through the 4th of every month to allow a bulk of apps to be submitted, and then applications can be submitted at any time during the month. Notices will be sent out all at once after the first "block" period, and then between 24 hours to the end of the weekend depending on how many and our schedule. Applications are guaranteed to be processed during the weekends.

Before applying, please be sure to read the following:

  • Read the Rules and the Game Information.
  • Double check the Reserves and Taken Characters lists (A-M | N-Z) to make sure the character you're applying for is not on the list. Also check the comments in case the entry has yet to be updated, as well as any pending applications.
  • RETURNING PLAYERS! You only need to submit any old application. Does not matter how long ago, as long as it was accepted and you have good standing (ie, not banned), it will be valid.
  • Feel free to use the most recent test drive both for practice as well as to use for samples. IMPORTANT! If you submit threads as samples, you must submit the application with that character journal. This is the only way we can ensure that the samples are from you and not someone else.
  • Linked samples must have been made within the past year.
  • You may apply for up to two characters per month.
  • Application challenges are allowed. Reserves will have priority, but it's not definitive. We will choose the better application regardless.
  • Do not plagiarize. If we find that the information provided was directly taken by either another player or source material such a wiki, the application will be rejected immediately. If we find this after processing the application, we will revoke the application and have you removed from the game with potential ban.
  • Reusing content from your own applications from other games is allowed. However, the application must follow our format, and we ask any original written samples to conform to our game. That is, we don't want to read samples that are set specifically for another game's premise. Note: this does not apply to threads linked from other games used as samples.
  • If you are rejected, you cannot reapply for the same character for two weeks. However, you can apply for a different character in that timeframe.
  • Those accepted must fill out all of the required entries within a week to be considered part of the game. Otherwise, we will consider it a revocation of the application.
  • Fill out the form and comment to this entry! You can either paste the application directly to the entry or link it from your own journal/musebox.


We have compiled sample applications from our players to show what the mod team and the application moderators are looking for in terms of writing quality and depth. We hope you find these samples useful!


⌈ PLAYER SECTION ⌉

Player:
Contact: Journal/Plurk/AIM — anything to help identify since someone might share your name handle.
Age: You must be at least 13 years old to apply.
Current Characters: If a new player, just put "N/A"


⌈ CHARACTER SECTION ⌉

Character:
Age:
Canon:
Canon Point:

Background: We do not need a play by play of their life. You can of course provide one, but it's not necessary. A summary of their role in the canon and important events involving their character will suffice. Wiki links are allowed.

Personality: Tell us everything you can about how the character works. What are their quirks, reasons for thinking, habits, and flaws—basically we want to know not only how they act, but also why they act that way. You are free to use canon as examples, but be sure to explain why you are referencing the event.

Abilities: If there are any particular abilities the character has supernatural or otherwise, list them here. Referencing to a wiki list is acceptable. However, if there are any particular abilities that need to be weakened or removed, note them here.

Alignment: Please refer to the Alignment entry to choose which alignment your character would most likely fall under. Include a brief (a couple of sentences max) just to help explain why you think your choice is the best fit.

Other: Anything else you'd like to mention.


⌈ SAMPLE SECTION ⌉

We have two sample requirements.

General Sample: We should see examples of the character's dialogue as well as some introspection or additional narrative to further show how you intend to write the character. This is the most important part of the sample and where most of the weight will be.

Emotion Sample: This is our "game setting" requirement. Essentially we want to ensure that you have a basic grasp of the game's premise, especially with the use of emotions. It can be a small scene, even incidental to the main sample. A reminder that apathetic characters will also create effects, such as loss of color, surface distortion, holes forming. This section doesn't have to be lengthy, but the effect must be clear for us to see.

The emotion sample can be part of the general character sample. If so, please link directly or directly quote that portion so that it's easier for us to quickly find it.

The samples can be "written" in three different ways and you can choose which one will work best for you:

  1. Test Drive. You can utilize our test drive to cover both requirements of the sample. So long as there is enough character portrayal and a scene with an emotional reaction, be it within the prompt or done during the thread, then it can be used for both.
  2. Link out + Written. You can link to threads/entries from other games, memes, or museboxes to show character portrayal, and then write an additional short scene for the emotion portion of the sample.
  3. Original Sample. You can write a complete sample that shows both character portrayal and a scene involving emotion use. This can be one sample or two separate samples. If you opt to write an original sample, you are welcome to use any prompts from any of our Test Drives, Intro Logs, Task Board, and even past events. You are also free to change things up and are not restricted to any of these prompts. They are just here to help offer ideas.

Format wise, you can use either [ brackets ] OR narrative prose. We do require that the writing at least be coherent, have proper sentence structure, and is mostly grammatically correct (we realize that writing styles can be loose/creative in [ bracket ] form so we're giving a bit more leeway). One last suggestion we have is try to have the character interacting with the environment and try thinking of the sample less of a narrative piece but more like a post or thread prompt you might make in the game. That will help the sample show not only how you will write the character, but also how you will play them in practice.


Questions: If you have any questions, ask them here.



Clean copy and paste form here:



(first application page has been archived and can be found here.)
thewisegirl: (ANNABETH (13))

Annabeth Chase | Camp Halfblood Chronicles | Reserved

[personal profile] thewisegirl 2017-06-02 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
thewisegirl: (ANNABETH (2))

Re: Revision

[personal profile] thewisegirl 2017-06-09 04:00 am (UTC)(link)
Hello!
I rewrote two tags and gonna copy them here. Hope that's okay. The tags are taken from the initial TDM sample and just rewritten so you can go back to the link to compare the changes.

Tag 1:
Okay, that just made her go from slightly confused to a little angry. Did he just call her mummy? Since you can't tell when it's a telepathic conversation who he's actually talking to. But also...he was supposed to be a representative of camp. A brave warrior? At least pretend to be one in part. Her breaths are short and quick now as she's trying to maintain control. Nearby, in her room, small cracks start to form along the corners of her wall from the feelings she is desperately trying to control. ]

You know I can hear your thoughts right?! Did you just call me mummy?

And you think I would joke about something like this? You definitely have me mixed up with the wrong cabin or have you forgotten who I am?!

[ She's holding her necklace in her hands now, her knuckles going white. This was the most ridiculous conversation to have in a world they're still unfamiliar with and in a place where her emotions had the ability to take physical form? Subconsciously, she's hiding the amulet in her fist, even though nobody else would be able to see it.]

Tag 2:
[ Her blood was boiling now. And she wasn't sure whether that would be due to embarrassment, anger or something else. The small cracks from before spread further, still small enough to not damage the room completely but clearly visible now. This was entirely not the way she was expecting this conversation to go and particular not the way she was expecting to hear those kinds of words for the first time. She takes back every single sliver of thought that perhaps she may have been developing feelings for him and pushes them as far down into dark recesses of her mind. ]

Perseus Jackson you be glad that I'm not near you right now because I swear...

[ Don't think for a second that she would hesitate to take you down like she knows she can. Stupidly overpowered water powers or not. She can still take you down. And you are really pushing it now. And with that thought, there was a small snapping sound in the room as two of the small cracks met together. ]
thewisegirl: (yeah)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] thewisegirl 2017-06-09 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
Hello,
I'll be joining with this journal as Annabeth. Thanks.