While the application shows promise, there are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
The personality section is currently too limited in scope, and we would like to see it fleshed out further. For instance, you mention that Jekyll is flawed on his own, but not necessarily how, aside from his self-loathing. We would also like to see more on how he interacts with others in a general sense, how he reacts to seeing what he views as evil, as well what Hyde thinks about other people and how he plans to work towards his goal of being "himself."
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
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The personality section is currently too limited in scope, and we would like to see it fleshed out further. For instance, you mention that Jekyll is flawed on his own, but not necessarily how, aside from his self-loathing. We would also like to see more on how he interacts with others in a general sense, how he reacts to seeing what he views as evil, as well what Hyde thinks about other people and how he plans to work towards his goal of being "himself."
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have one week to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!