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Empatheias Mods ([personal profile] simpathis) wrote2014-05-22 12:35 am

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⌈ CHARACTER SECTION ⌉

Character:
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Personality: Tell us everything you can about how the character works. What are their quirks, reasons for thinking, habits, and flaws—basically we want to know not only how they act, but also why they act that way. You are free to use canon as examples, but be sure to explain why you are referencing the event.

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⌈ SAMPLE SECTION ⌉

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Clean copy and paste form here:

gardeningaia: (a lone gardener)

Aerith Gainsborough | Final Fantasy VII | Reserved

[personal profile] gardeningaia 2015-06-03 05:04 am (UTC)(link)
⌈ PLAYER SECTION ⌉

Player: Raaj
Contact: kilraaj@plurk
Age: 27
Current Characters: Tiz Arrior ([personal profile] thiswarrior)


⌈ CHARACTER SECTION ⌉

Character: Aerith Gainsborough
Age: 22
Canon: Final Fantasy VII
Canon Point: end game. post punching a meteor in the face with the lifestream and all that jazz.

Background:Have a link.

Personality:

Optimism and kindness are Aerith's defining traits. Throughout her life, Aerith endured seven years of captivity and fifteen more of being tracked, four years of writing to a lost love without knowing why he disappeared, multiple kidnapping attempts, even her sudden murder; at the end of everything, she is still smiling and encouraging others to endure until they find their happiness. Though this extends to nearly all without reservation, she is shown having a particular soft spot for and ease with children; two were shown in the game planning to tend to her beloved flowers for her while she's away.

Of course, both her optimism and kindness aren't flawless. Aerith lived a genuinely hard life, and one way she found to deal with it was lying those problems away. She hid her Cetra heritage from her boyfriend and adoptive mother because she wanted to be "normal", and after Zack's death she lied about the nature of their relationship and her feelings for him to smother her grief. When confronted with something unexpected, she would run away and refuse to show her face until she can fake a smile, as she did when the group happened to run into Zack's parents: she walked out of the house abruptly and stayed turned away in a corner until Cloud found her, then told him she really didn't mind about not hearing from Zack. However, though she lied to others about his importance, she continued to wear the pink dress and ribbon that came from him. It's not too different from how she kept her birth mother's materia in her hair every day. Aerith wasn't able to make many deep relationships in life, so she strongly cherishes each one she has. Even some of the stranger ones: she cried when Tseng, the man who'd tried all through her life to bring her back to the laboratory she hated, was gravely wounded by Sephiroth's blade. At the same time she acknowledged him as the enemy of her and her friends, she admitted that there weren't many people she could claim knew her as well as he did.

That was all due to her heritage as a Cetra. Being the last of her race made an incalculable impact on the course of her life. As hard as she once tried to hide it, afraid and tired of being pursued for abilities she barely understood, toward the end of her life she was able to discover what being a Cetra was truly about and became much more confident as one. She might still keep mum about it at times out of the habit of not wanting to draw attention, but the confusion and fear that used to surround her thoughts about it are gone now.

Her kindness is heartfelt, but Aerith sometimes makes social slips that hurt feelings. Like Tifa, she took an interest in Cloud, and unlike Tifa, she was bolder about her interest. Though she reassured the other woman when they both met that she and Cloud hardly knew each other, she also occasionally flirted with him right in front of her friend. She also angered Barret when she meant to comfort him by sweeping the problem under the rug — he wasn't in the mood for her fun and games, and she's not always patient with people.

However, her caring nature still dominates over any awkwardness she causes. Tifa and Aerith became fast friends in spite of any jealousy and she encouraged Barret shortly after his outburst when he needed it.

Aerith's cheerful nature comes with playfulness and teasing; she's a bit mischievous, and just as she can lie about serious matters, she can easily fib or pull people's legs with a joke. ("You know, Mister. He always said that just once, he'd like to dress up as a girl.") It's a great way to keep your spirits up, and occasionally a way to misdirect people's attention, both useful things growing up in a city like Midgar.

As strong as her optimism is, she could have also been a fit for Thras. Despite her heritage, she was the most normal of the party when it came to fighting technique; however, she was stubborn about not being sheltered from the action, claiming "I'm used to it". As much as she got scared and panicked at moments, she also stubbornly confronted those fears. She's even been reckless at times, and threw AVALANCHE for a loop when she furtively ran away to save the Planet as a Cetra--one event in the chain that led to her murder, sadly enough, but also to the salvation of the world.

...Still, while she's happy as a Cetra to have a better understanding of the Planet, joining the Lifestream just isn't the way she wanted to do it. So being alive again will be fun for her, and something to make the most of.

(full disclaimer that this is adapted from a previous application which can be found here, altered for the changed canon point. I added a note to the player section of that app so you can see it's me.)

Abilities:LOOK AT THESE LIMIT BREAKS

She also has the ability to use materia, except why would she have any, she's been dead a couple months already.

Setting aside the battle system for a moment, Aerith also has abilities from being a Cetra! Namely, she is capable of speaking to and hearing the Planet because of her spiritual nature. In Empatheias, with mod approval, this would translate into her being sensitive to the flow of emotions within the land, though she would have to cultivate a sensitivity to the world first. This may in goofy ff7 tradition involve a lot of lying down on the ground and asking "WHAT ARE YOU SAYING?"

Alignment: Peromei, obviously.

Other:


⌈ SAMPLE SECTION ⌉

Sample: I hope this suffices? It was played out with a slightly earlier canon point in mind, but her personality doesn't change significantly between those points.


Questions:
Edited 2015-06-03 05:04 (UTC)
redstainedking: (A precious melody)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] redstainedking 2015-06-04 05:48 am (UTC)(link)
This one.
unpleasantries: (I find it funny that you never even knew)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] unpleasantries 2015-06-04 06:06 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'll be using this journal!
callyourname: (✿ But watching you stand alone)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] callyourname 2015-06-04 06:08 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! ♥ this is her journal, i'll do the rest in a few hours when i get home
biggreenragemonster: (No this is much worse)

[personal profile] biggreenragemonster 2015-06-04 06:29 am (UTC)(link)
I reworded a few parts of the personality section. I THOUGHT I remembered reading something about knowing a bunch of languages somewhere, but I can't find it either, so I just axed it from the app entirely. Hopefully this is now acceptable.
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[personal profile] luminoledgeable 2015-06-04 07:26 am (UTC)(link)
No problem at all. Wasn't sure if it would be needed since at her canon point it's been two years and she doesn't bring it up at all in either AAI game or AJ. So one thing to bear in mind is that while this stuff did happen, it doesn't hang over her head or really affect her current characterization at the chosen canon point.

SL-9 is an incident that involved a serial murderer by the name of Joe Darke. Ema's sister, Lana, was one of the detectives in charge of solving the case and Ema herself didn't get involved until the very end. On a day when the suspect was being questioned, Ema happened to be in Lana's office waiting for her sister to finish when the suspect escaped and came into Lana's office and attacked Ema. Neil Marshall, the prosecutor assigned to the case, came in after the suspect to try and apprehend him. He was able to save Ema's life, but he became the last victim.

Ema's memory of the incident was incredibly vague and it also didn't help matters that there was a power outage during that time and the only time she could see anything of what was going on was when lightning flashed. She did her best to try and draw a picture of what she remembered for another of the detectives involved, Detective Goodman, and she was also to act as a witness, but ended up not being able to say much of anything that helped. In the end the suspect was found guilty anyhow, but due to Lana forging evidence with the help of the then acting police chief, Damon Gant.

After that, Lana became Chief Prosecutor, Gant became chief of police, and others involved were demoted or let go entirely. Only Goodman kept his same position. Ema pretty much forgot about the incident other than the fact that after that her sister changed, and not for the better. Still, that change didn't ever affect how much she cares about her sister.

Then two years later, Lana gets involved in an incident and is suspected of murdering Detective Goodman. Ema knows her sister would never murder someone, especially not someone she knew well. So she sought out the services of a defense attorney that Lana had recommended. At first she sought out Mia Fey, but upon finding out that Mia had died a few months previous, she ended up getting Phoenix Wright on the case.

Ema was determined to help Phoenix find what he needed to get Lana a not guilty. She acted as Phoenix's assistant and helped him with scientific investigations. For the first time Phoenix was able to dust for fingerprints and test for bloodstains, which helped him a lot to find some things he wouldn't have been able to find otherwise. Most of the time when she's helping Phoenix she's just glad to be of help and determined to convince everyone that her sister isn't a murderer. She has no idea that Lana was taking the heat for Gant to protect Ema.

The new case became incredibly confusing because seemingly Goodman had been murdered in two locations at the same time. On the very last day of it, Phoenix had to dredge up the details of SL-9 because it was obvious that the former case had to do with the current one. Also, Lana admitted in court that she had indeed forged evidence for that case, which caused an uproar. Still, Ema didn't think badly of her sister. She knew Joe Darke was deserving of his punishment. If anything it made her more determined to do the best job she could investigating this case so there wasn't a need to forge evidence so criminals like Darke can be punished.

Lana did try to stop Phoenix from bringing things up because she was doing her utmost to protect Ema. But Ema encouraged Phoenix to keep going because she was that determined to find her sister not guilty. Phoenix also was convinced that Lana didn't do it and had evidence showing it was Gant. In the process of this, it looked for a time like Ema was the one who killed Neil Marshall. This definitely was upsetting to Ema, yet she kept on going. Ema is definitely a very resilient person and this time she was able to testify as to what she saw.

Before Ema or Lana could be too upset by it, Phoenix brought up the fact that he suspected that Lana had been deceived and wasn't actually the first one on the scene.

By the end of this, Phoenix was able to prove that both Lana and Ema were innocent of murder, but he couldn't save Lana from her own confession of forging evidence. Still, everyone was happy with that outcome because the sentence for forging evidence was much less than for murder. Ema was able to say goodbye to her sister before she was taken away to serve her sentence thanks to Edgeworth and Ema was so glad to finally see her sister back the way she was. She knew she could wait for Lana to serve the sentence given. Ema was sent to family in Europe to finish up high school in the meantime. At her canon point, she's visiting for a short time to act as a translator for a teacher who also is visiting. When she helps Edgeworth during some of his cases in AAI and AAI2, she mentions nothing about the two cases, just that she's happy in Europe with her family there. It's also not outright said if Lana is still in prison, but assumed she is.

But two years later, Ema has moved on from all this. About the only thing left that shows of her experiences here is her determination to become a forensic scientist. She understands why her sister and Gant had to do what they did. Gant was acting to make sure a heinous criminal was put behind bars and couldn't hurt anyone else and Lana was acting to protect her sister. She doesn't approve of Gant committing murder in the name of catching a criminal, however. If it ever came up, Ema would very much agree that Neil Marshall shouldn't have had to die to bring Darke to justice. It would have been another matter entirely if Marshall had truly been the last of Darke's victims, but Darke should have been able to be arrested from the witness testimony Ema could provide, and Marshall could have provided had he lived. Ema believes that with scientific investigation that a person like Marshall and Goodman would be alive now and her sister wouldn't have spent two years in misery and Gant would still be a great police chief instead of a murderer. That's why she's so eager to help Edgeworth out in the cases where she helps him because she doesn't want to see others be falsely accused of crimes because someone else wanted them to take the blame. She doesn't even bring up this mess in the face of Blaise Debeste and Simon Keyes who were very much like Gant, except lacking in good intentions at any point. This definitely shows how resilient Ema can be to tragedy and even during 1-5 she was only upset when she thought she killed Neil Marshall and her sister covered it up and pinned the blame on Darke. She knows she's not a killer, so it had to have been an accident if she was to blame. In the end though, she was more upset that Lana went through so much to protect her and then it turned out to all be a lie. She truly was more upset by how Lana became so distant and was so willing to believe Ema killed Marshall, even by accident. She was also upset that Lana was supposed to be a person who upholds the law, and then used unlawful means to protect her own sister rather than the lawful means of hiring a defense attorney to find Ema not guilty like Phoenix did. Truly, Lana's actions bothered her far more than the thought that she could have accidentally killed a man, though it did help that Phoenix acted quickly to find Ema not guilty since that would be necessary to find Lana not guilty of Goodman's murder.
crescentblade: pixiv: (Default)

Re: Declined

[personal profile] crescentblade 2015-06-04 07:30 am (UTC)(link)
it's all right! i must've missed that part about canon ocs not being allowed in the rules, but i understand completely. thanks for looking over my app!
weaponsgrade: (i love it when a plan comes together)

Re: Accepted!

[personal profile] weaponsgrade 2015-06-04 09:19 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'll be using this journal.
gardeningaia: (a lone gardener)

[personal profile] gardeningaia 2015-06-04 01:35 pm (UTC)(link)
This is the journal I'll be using!
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[personal profile] luminoledgeable 2015-06-04 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Using this journal!
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[personal profile] biggreenragemonster 2015-06-05 03:04 am (UTC)(link)
"Were they both normal people, he might actually consider pursuing her romantically, but as it is he can't for a number of reasons. The first is that he's not very good at reading people, so he isn't confident in guessing how receptive she might be to the idea. The other is that he doesn't think he deserves it. He sees himself as a ticking time bomb that is eventually going to explode and hurt a lot of people. He doesn't want to make someone else part of that life, so even if she WERE to express a returned interest (which she will), he doesn't feel like he could accept it.

Because he doesn't see an end. He has no idea how to get rid of the Hulk. He's a freak. At one point, he felt so hopeless about it that he tried suicide, but the Hulk "protected" him from even that. With that option denied to him, he's done his best to keep his act together and devoted his life to helping people however he can, in a desperate attempt to build up good karma that will make up for when (not if) the Hulk finally makes a mess. He doesn't feel like it's enough, but it's the best he's come up with."

That was a new stuff, plus a few minor edits to other stuff. Basically I was going with the interpretation (regarding Natasha) that there was already some growing chemistry between them before Age of Ultron starts. It's not until the movie starts that they start really acting on it, but the feelings were growing some time before that. Several characters remark that they saw it coming during the film, so it doesn't seem like a stretch. I also got rid of the part about not feeling like part of the team because while I feel like there's a thought in there somewhere, I wasn't QUITE sure how to express it. He IS part of the team, but Bruce is out of place on a battlefield and he knows it, is sort of what I'm trying to say???